如何提高托福寫作分?jǐn)?shù)？ 干貨分享！

獨(dú)立寫作就是標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的議論文，對一個話題進(jìn)行論述分析。獨(dú)立寫作涉及的范圍更廣一些。總的來說，托福獨(dú)立寫作的題型主要包含了二選一、三選一、絕對詞題、今昔對比題、事實(shí)現(xiàn)象題、以及should題。

獨(dú)立寫作對于絕大部分考生來說，如何充分論證一個觀點(diǎn)的同時又具有很好的銜接關(guān)系是最大的一個難題。

考生們寫?yīng)毩懽髯畲蟮墓缠Q就是沒有那么多話好說。一篇議論文的論證方法有很多：舉例論證，原因論證，結(jié)果論證，對比論證，假設(shè)論證，解釋說明，數(shù)據(jù)支撐等等。

在上述論證方法中，對比論證在托福寫作中應(yīng)該是應(yīng)用得比較多的一種論證方法，因?yàn)閷W(xué)生可以在相對較短的時間里想出一些論點(diǎn)。對比論證主要包含一件事物的正反對比，通常在二選一，三選一和should的考試題型中應(yīng)用較為廣泛。

第二種是今夕對比，即拿過去與現(xiàn)在對比，這篇文章重點(diǎn)講解了今夕對比的應(yīng)用，希望能給廣大考生們授之以漁。

01第一種，對比論證

講解對比論證之前先給各位同學(xué)一個情景假設(shè)，左吳亦凡，右宋小寶，選擇一個當(dāng)男朋友你會pick誰？

遂廣大小仙女的愿望，我選擇吳亦凡；

那我現(xiàn)在來分析一下我們剛剛選擇的步驟，首先我們確定了觀點(diǎn)：選擇吳亦凡。

然后我們做出來比較，和宋小寶相比吳亦凡更帥；

其次，我們寫出了一些吳亦凡帥的細(xì)節(jié)和宋小寶相對不足的細(xì)節(jié)來證明我們的觀點(diǎn)；最后，我們得出結(jié)論，選擇吳亦凡。

其實(shí)，我們在托福獨(dú)立寫作中對比論證的套路就是這樣的，我們便可以總結(jié)出對比論證的步驟。

?確立觀點(diǎn) ??→??提出對比???→???展開細(xì)節(jié)???→??得出結(jié)論

02第二種，今昔對比

今昔對比題應(yīng)該是托福寫作考試中的重點(diǎn)題型之一。

TPO以及歷年真題中都會出現(xiàn)很多這種題型的題目，通常會拿現(xiàn)在與過去進(jìn)行比較，也會存在與將來進(jìn)行比較。

遇見這種題型的時候，考生可以用到時間對比的概念來論證解題。

比如，我們可以看一看TPO上面的一些今昔對比典型的考題。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is easier to maintain good health today than it was in the past.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Young people are more likely to help others today than they were in the past.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.

我們來用剛剛“選男朋友”的方法來講解這個題目

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：

Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

此題，我選擇的觀點(diǎn)是。同意，現(xiàn)在的老師比以前更受尊敬。

首先，確立寫作框架。

根據(jù)這個框架，寫作主體部分的文章如下，給各位考生作為參考：

確立觀點(diǎn)

The qualifications on being a professional teacher has been significantly enhanced in the past few years, which contributes to the improvement of teachers’ reputation.

提出對比

Exposed to this competitive society, the majority of educational positions require more relevant working experience and skill and teachers tend to own doctor’s degrees.

展開細(xì)節(jié)

By contrast, in the old days, the limitation and restriction of acting as a teacher was seriously deficient.

Quite a few teachers were considered as graduating from vocational schools rather than universities, let alone possessing a teacher certification, which gives rise to the severe inefficiency of education.

得出結(jié)論

Therefore, individuals in the past failed to think highly of their teachers.

再講解一個例題，各位童鞋也可以根據(jù)剛剛講解的方法論，自己嘗試用今夕對比完成一個中間段的書寫

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：

Young people today are less dependent on their parents than in the past.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

此題，我選擇的觀點(diǎn)是同意，現(xiàn)在的孩子比以前更獨(dú)立；

首先確立寫作框架；根據(jù)這個框架，寫作主體部分的文章如下，給各位考生作為參考：

One of the most critical reasons is that the advancement of contemporary science and technology enable young generation to overcome difficulties more efficient than before.

Since there are an increasing number of advanced apparatuses coming out these days, youth are inclined to search things they have little acquaintance online and figure them out without the assistance from their parents. By contrast, decades ago, the young were prone to depend on their parents on some trivial matters in their daily life, such as cooking dishes, buying clothes.

Nowadays?, they might search through the internet or just let the electric cooker automatically cook the ingredients and obtain some exquisite and faddish clothes via some application programmers in cellphones. This kind of support from the internet turns out to be more beneficial and advisable than from their parents.

Therefore, the advanced science should take responsibility for the independence of youngster.

希望大家都能早日考出滿意的成績~