哈佛錄取率逐年降低，2022年最新錄取哈佛優秀文書展示

近日，很多大學都陸續公布了2022年的新生錄取數據，哈佛大學也不例外。與往年數據一對比，簡直不敢相信自己的眼睛。一起來看看吧~

申請人數再度攀升，錄取率逐年降低

哈佛大學2026屆申請數據
申請批次	申請數量	錄取學生	錄取率
常規申請	51814	1214	2.3%
早申	9406	740	7.9%
合計	61220	1954	3.2%

哈佛大學近三年整體錄取率
年份	申請數量	錄取學生	錄取率
2026	61220	1954	3.19%
2025	57435	1968	3.43%
2024	40248	1980	4.92%

2022年一共有61,220人申請了哈佛大學，2021年申請人數為57435人，和去年相比增長了7%。其中，早申人數9406人，錄取740人，錄取率為7.9%；常規申請51814人，錄取1214人，錄取率2.3%；waitlist轉正人數暫未公布。

雖然錄取人數一漲再漲，但是錄取率卻降低了。

2022年最終的錄取人數為1954人，錄取率為3.19%，相比于去年的錄取率為3.43%，也就是說今年的3.19%是哈佛史上最低的錄取率。

近幾年哈佛大學錄取人數基本維持在1900人左右，今年錄取率降低主要是因為申請人激增導致的。

近三年哈佛大學整體錄取率，都低于5%，算是前十美國大學中，錄取率最低的學校之一了。其實錄取率暴跌幾乎都是疫情后發生的，原本哈佛大學的錄取率都有回升趨勢了，疫情發生后就直接全軍覆沒。

下圖是近20年，哈佛大學申請人數和錄取率走勢：

在這樣的大環境下，頂尖學霸們標化、課外活動履歷其實都已經相差無幾了，優秀的文書可能會幫助他們取得意想不到的成績。

2022錄取哈佛優秀文書

哈佛也在近期公布了最新錄取哈佛的十篇優秀文書，申請2023年秋季入學的同學可以看一下。認真體會下優秀文書的語言風格，寫作邏輯，以及如何講好自己的故事。

通過這些文書的閱讀，大家可以看下招生官喜歡什么樣的學生，如何通過自己的經歷，把這些特質展示給招生官，優秀的文書需要很長時間的打磨和修改，因此，今年的申請者，可以提前著手文書的創作，還是那句話，申請名校，語言成績只是敲門磚，真正贏得招生官青睞的還是要看文書是否打動他，活動是否有足夠的含金量。

好文書的四個標準是：Correctness（準確），Content（有料），Clarity (清晰)，Creativity（新穎）。

準確：用詞準確，時態、拼寫和標點沒有錯誤。這一標準用來評判學生是否具備基本英文寫作能力。

有料：檢查文章是否圍繞學生自身來寫，是否真實，是否展現學生個性、才能以及思想深度，能否引起反思。

清晰：文章簡潔，觀點清晰明確；運用恰當的措辭、詞匯、語法以及多樣精致的句式結構，這是即將步入大學的高中生應該必備的。

新穎：能否吸引讀者的注意力？主題表達是否新穎？

一起來體會下：

范文1：Eda's Essay：十三年無家可歸

誠實的、令人心碎、強大的，這是閱讀Eda的文章后首先想到的三個詞。Eda通過文書不僅僅是告訴招生官關于她的旅程，更強調了她的旅程是多么不典型。招生官被她能夠克服任何苦難的決心所吸引，這樣的品質將會讓Eda成為一名強大申請者。

文書內容展示

I sat on my parents’ bed weeping with my head resting on my knees. “Why did you have to do that to me? Why did you have to show me the house and then take it away from me?” Hopelessly, I found myself praying to God realizing it was my last resort.

For years, my family and I found ourselves moving from country to country in hopes of a better future. Factors, such as war and lack of academic opportunities, led my parents to pack their bags and embark on a new journey for our family around the world. Our arduous journey first began in Ku?ov?, Albania, then Athens, Greece, and then eventually, Boston, Massachusetts. Throughout those years, although my family always had a roof over our heads, I never had a place I could call “home.”

That night that I prayed to God, my mind raced back to the night I was clicking the delete button on my e-mails, but suddenly stopped when I came upon a listing of the house. It was September 22, 2007 —eight years exactly to the day that my family and I had moved to the United States. Instantly, I knew that it was fate that was bringing this house to me. I remembered visiting that yellow house the next day with my parents and falling in love with it. However, I also remembered the heartbreaking phone call I received later on that week saying that the owners had chosen another family’s offer.

A week after I had prayed to God, I had given up any hopes of my family buying the house. One day after school, I unlocked the door to our one-bedroom apartment and walked over to the telephone only to see it flashing a red light. I clicked PLAY and unexpectedly heard the voice of our real estate agent. “Eda!” she said joyfully. “The deal fell through with the other family—the house is yours! Call me back immediately to get started on the papers.” For a moment, I stood agape and kept replaying the words in my head. Was this really happening to me? Was my dream of owning a home finally coming true?

Over the month of November, I spent my days going to school and immediately rushing home to make phone calls. Although my parents were not fluent enough in English to communicate with the bank and real estate agent, I knew that I was not going to allow this obstacle to hinder my dream of helping to purchase a home for my family. Thus, unlike a typical thirteen-year-old girl’s conversations, my phone calls did not involve the mention of makeup, shoes, or boys. Instead, my conversations were composed of terms, such as “fixed-rate mortgages,” “preapprovals,” and “down payments.” Nevertheless, I was determined to help purchase this home after thirteen years of feeling embarrassed from living in a one-bedroom apartment. No longer was I going to experience feelings of humiliation from not being able to host sleepovers with my friends or from not being able to gossip with girls in school about who had the prettiest room color.

I had been homeless for the first thirteen years of my life. Although I will never be able to fully repay my parents for all of their sacrifices, the least I could do was to help find them a home that they could call their own—and that year, I did. To me, a home means more than the general conception of “four walls and a roof.” A home is a place filled with memories and laughter from my family. No matter where my future may lead me, I know that if at times I feel alone, I will always have a yellow home with my family inside waiting for me.

文書點評

誠實、動人、有力，這是閱讀 Eda 的文章后首先想到的三個詞。

通過誠實的表達方式，Eda展示了她隨著時間的推移而真正的成長和成熟。我們喜歡 Eda 的文章的地方在于它把個人脆弱性表達得令人耳目一新。例如，她以她在父母床上哭泣的場景開始整篇文章，并將自己的不幸歸咎于他們。

在整篇文章中，她的個人聲音也很強烈。當她談到愛上“那棟黃色的房子”時，我們腦海中會自動浮現出這棟房子的形象。當她談到得知“黃色房子”被賣給另一個家庭時所經歷的心碎時，我們也感到心痛。她有意描寫“播放”她收到的語音郵件，以及她隨后的內心想法，進一步促使我們與她一起重溫她的心路歷程。

然而，作者不僅僅是告訴我們她的歷程。她強調了她的歷程是多么不一樣。她沒有享受關于化妝品或鞋子的電話交談，而是與代理商談論固定利率抵押貸款和首付……所有這些都是在 13 歲時她要做的。盡管她沒有明確說明這一點，但很明顯，她必須盡快成長，成為一個更強大的人。

作者對“家”這個詞的理解從普通的屋頂演變為更抽象的屋頂。家就是她的“回憶和歡笑”所在的地方。最后，她接受了父母做出的犧牲，并學會為自己的成長感到自豪。

由于篇幅原因，剩下幾篇文書和點評內容就不展示了。

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