外研版必修二1-3模塊 考綱寫作訓練

外研必修2 ?Module 1

怎樣寫健康飲食報告

【寫作任務】

某英文報社健康飲食征文活動中，你的題為“我的飲食小貼士”入圍，請用英語寫一篇短文，上傳到學校校園網，供大家參

要求：

1.詞數100左右。

2.可適當改變細節，以使短文連貫。

3.參考詞匯：nutrition營養

【審題與構思】

l?審定主體結構

我的健康飲食報告屬說明文，即把自己在日常生活中，養生、膳食所遵循的標準寫出來，告知人們良好的飲食習慣是健康的前提，懂得養生，才能吃出健康。

l?確定篇章結構

正文采用排列式：

健康飲食小貼士，基本是日常膳食的安排，按從早到晚的飲食習慣，表明了飲食習慣與健康的關系，所以吃出了快樂健康的心境。

注意事項：

1. 這類說明文常用一般現在時，第三人稱。

2. 正文內容要緊扣主題，組織要點；語句要精煉，不拖泥帶水。

3. 根據要求既可用排列式，也可用短文式；如短文式，注意巧過度。

核定句子結構

常用詞匯：

Food, diet, regular, breakfast, lunch, supper, dinner, meal, snack, health, fit, stay/keep healthy, keep fit, taste, choose, produce, fast food, fat, sugar, put on weight, fresh, vegetable, fruit, go on a diet, keep a balanced diet, power, energy, stay in good health

句型應用：

As the saying goes/as the proverb runs…

…make a plan on…

They are as follows:

Drink some warm water in the early morning to...

Have a good breakfast in order to…

Mix meat, vegetables, fruits and food together and they will …

Keeping a balanced diet is a good way to stay healthy

Eating a good breakfast is a good habit and necessary for good health.

You should eat different kinds of food to keep fit

Food is the source of power for the body.

【佳作欣賞】

My tips on a healthy diet

As the famous saying goes “Happiness lies first of all in health”, I made a plan on my daily diet, combining it with my common knowledge. They are as follows:

1. Drink some warm water in the early morning to add water in the body.

2. Have a good breakfast in order to supply the needed energy.

3. Drinking some soup before meals is just like warming up before exercise, which is well prepared for dinner.

4. Mix meat, vegetables and food together and they will have better nutrition.

In a word, keeping a balanced diet is a good way to stay healthy. Having enough fruit and vegetables every day can get the doctors away. I’m now happy and healthy for above tips.

外研必修2 ?Module 2

怎樣寫勸告信

【寫作任務】

假如你是李燕，某中學高一學生，你勸告父親戒煙的信件被老師推薦到校刊雙語交流欄目，請根據信件內容，提煉要點，勸父親戒煙。

要求：

1.詞數100左右。

2.可適當改變細節，以使短文連貫。

3.參考詞匯：second hand smoke二手煙

【審題與構思】

l?審定主體結構

勸告信是社會人際交往中，親戚、朋友、長者對晚輩、師生之間的勸勉、告誡的交際方式，體現了“知無不言，言無不盡”的誠信關系。

l?確定篇章結構

正文開始點明勸告具體內容----要求父親戒煙。

接著說明抽煙的危害---引發多種疾病，周圍人受害。

最后表明希望---健康、快樂的老爸。

注意事項：

1. 這類書信常用一般現在時，第一人稱。

2. 根據自己與收信人之間關系，注意措辭和語言表達。

核定句子結構

常用詞匯：

Letter of advice, suggest, persuade, cigarette, second hand smoke, disease, thin, cough, worry about, do harm to, support the family, grow up, damage, effect, give up smoking, healthy, energetic, happy, take exercise, stay healthy

句型應用：

It pains me greatly to learn that you…

It is a shock to me to hear from your letter that you…

I’d like to suggest that…

It does harm to…

I’m writing to express my view about…

I feel that it would be beneficial if…

I hope you will…

How I wish that…

【佳作欣賞】

Dear father

I really don’t want to see you smoking any more. All these years you start to become thinner and thinner, coughing all the time. I do know you are worrying about supporting the family.

My mother and I have stood your second hand smoke for many years. Now your daughter grows up and knows the damaging effects of second hand smoke. It’s reported that the second hand smoke can cause more diseases than people who don’t smoke. So for your dear daughter and my mother, I hope you give up smoking completely. How I wish I could see my healthy, energetic father, who can live with us happily. Please have more healthy diet and take more exercise to stay healthy.

Your dear daughter

【寫作任務】

假如你是李燕，某中學高一學生，你的筆友Jenny發郵件詢問，她從新聞網上看到，中國要求公務員戒煙，請回信告訴她有關情況，

具體內容如下：

1.抽煙在中國很普遍。

2.人們逐漸意識其危害。

3.各大網站順勢呼吁公務員戒煙，起帶頭作用。

要求：

1.詞數100左右。

2.可適當改變細節，以使短文連貫。

【審題與構思】

l?審定主體結構

社會人際交往中，人們難免用書信和郵件進行聯系，這就反映了寫信與回信。一般來說回信主要針對來信的具體內容進行清楚、明了的回答，語言要簡潔，態度要誠懇，格式要正確，并附帶簡單的問候。

l?確定篇章結構

正文采用三段：

第一段，收到來信的心情、時間等。

第二段，主要回答來信談及問題。

第三段，總結并問候。

注意事項：

1. 這類書信常用一般現在時，第一人稱。

2. 根據自己與收信人之間關系，注意措辭和語言表達。

核定句子結構

常用詞匯：

national public servant, cigarette, second hand smoke, disease, do harm to, damage, give up smoking, stop smoking, healthy, happy, pollute, environment, suffer, realize

句型應用：

Your letter reached me shortly after I…

I’m very excited/happy/glad to hear from…

It’s very nice of you to…

… do harm to…

What’s worse,

With time going on,

Call on sb to do sth

live a … life

【佳作欣賞】

Dear Jenny,

Your letter reached me shortly after I had finished my work. It’s very nice of you to think of me.

In your letter you asked me why national public servants are asked to stop smoking, especially in public places. I now tell you. In China most of people smoke, which pollutes the environment and does harm to their health. What’s worse, people around suffer second hand smoke, sometimes it even causes fire. With time going on, people come to realize the damage of smoking. So some websites call on national public servants to give up smoking, playing the leading role by the way.

Indeed, people need live a high quality life.

Yours, Li Yan

外研必修2 ?Module 3

如何介紹人物的生平

【寫作任務】

請根據下列表格提示，介紹你所喜愛的音樂人周杰倫的生平事跡。

姓名	周杰倫	英文名	Jay Chou
出生	1979.1.18	籍貫	中國臺灣
生平簡介	1.是出色的歌手、著名音樂人和導演。 2.從小父母離異，性格孤獨，但對音樂表現驚人天賦。 3.專長節奏藍調(R&B)和饒舌(rap)，有“亞洲流行天王”之稱。 4.創造出多變的歌曲風格，他的歌曲受到全世界華人的喜愛。

要求：1.詞數100左右。

2.可適當改變細節，以使短文連貫。

【審題與構思】

l?審定主體結構

介紹人物生平是對某人的事跡，作簡單介紹，使讀者對其有個大概的了解。寫作時，不僅語言要簡短精煉、生動感人，而且選材要有重點，不能面面俱到，要突出其一生中的典型事跡和驚人的成就。

l?確定篇章結構

正文采用三段式：

首先開門見山----簡述周杰倫慨況。

接著介紹具體情況---性格、音樂成就。

最后表明其影響---得到大家喜愛。

注意事項：

1. 人物生平介紹簡歷要用一般過去時，介紹人物的現狀要用一般現在時，人稱第三人稱。

2. 內容要真實，銜接要有連貫性、邏輯性和可讀性，注意應用好過渡性詞匯。

核定句子結構

常用詞匯：

Tall, short, pretty, naughty, lovely, easy-going, smart ,wise, bright, diligent, lazy, clever, healthy, ?humorous, funny, silent, attractive, talkative, excited, pleased, satisfied, disappointed, friendly, curious, eager,

句型應用：

be born in…

be crazy about…

be interested in/ be fond of

When he was young, he…

be famous/well-known for/as…

People will always remember him as…

【佳作欣賞】

Zhou Jielun, whose English name is Jay Chow, was born on January 18,1979, Taiwan.

When he was young, his parents got divorced. Because of this, he grew more lonely. His lonely nature made him completely absorbed in his music world, especially good at R&B and rap. Devoted himself to music, the talented boy published many albums, and he was honored as Asian pop star Jay Chow. He created and developed the Chinese-speaking songs as a new level, who is loved by middle school students and all Chinese people.

Zhou Jielun is now a household name. He is a successful singer, an excellent actor and even a director at present.