雅思那些考官最討厭的事千萬別做

為什么寫作分數總是提不上去？

技巧學了不少、華麗詞藻也用了好多，但依舊是萬年5.5？

很有一種可能就是你的開頭段寫作出了問題！開頭沒寫好給考官的印象會大打折扣哦！考官連看的興趣都沒有了，給的分數怎么會高呢？如何提高雅思寫作技巧，寫出滿意的雅思作文？下面我們就一起來看一下，小編在授課過程中，從烤鴨們真實寫作里搜集到的考官最討厭的八大開頭！

廢話連篇

開篇就要主題明了清晰、開門見山、直奔主題，上來就啰啰嗦嗦表達不清，考官自然認為你的觀點模糊，甚至不會表達。

Topic: Should college students be allowed to get married?學生案例：This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

明明用一句話就能表達清楚：“In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.”

中式英文

用中式英文開頭，不僅會讓考官看不懂，還暴露了你的語言功底，語料積累匱乏，是雅思寫作中的大忌。

Topic 1: The happiest moment in your life學生案例：In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

Topic 2: Is there fairness in today’s business world?

學生案例：I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

偏離主題

文不對題，內容和語言寫得再好，給考官留下的印象就是跑題，整體寫作分數怎么會高呢？

Topic: It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真題)學生案例：I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

過分簡單 沒有重點

字數太少，基本無實際內容，考官想給你打分都沒有內容。所以切記盡量豐富內容，但是也不能為了湊字數照抄題目！

Topic:The importance of environmental protection學生案例：This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

用詞不當 表達不準

用詞不當不僅會暴露詞匯量的有限，而且評分標準中也明確要求“在不同的語境中，使用正確的詞匯”。所以在使用詞匯的時候，正確性也是非常重要的。如果想要取得更高的分數，那么詞匯的多樣性也要更多的納入考慮。切記，不要用口語化的表達！

Topic 1: The importance of confidence學生案例：In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

Topic 2：The solution to the traffic problem

學生案例：I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

語法錯誤不斷

雅思寫作評分標準中第四項就是考察考試的語法多樣性和準確性，語法錯誤不斷自然會成為扣分點。

學生案例：About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility.

意思重復

三四句話反復重復表達一個意思，不僅寫作句子之間邏輯性差，同時也會讓考官覺得你并沒有什么可以表達的。或者詞匯表達能力有限，自然也會扣分。

典型案例Topic: Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

觀點模糊態度曖昧

雅思大作文很重要的一點就是寫作的觀點和對觀點論述的邏輯性，如果觀點都不明確，后面的舉例證明等都會缺乏說服力，自然分數也不會高。

Topic: Should college students be allowed to get married?學生案例：I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

總結

1.開頭切記不要用中式英語表達，多積累地道的英語表達；

2.表達的觀點要客觀明確，切勿模棱兩可絕對化；

3.內容要清晰明了，切勿反復啰嗦，也不能一句話代之；

4.注意詞性使用，減少語法錯誤，不要生搬硬套“華麗辭藻”。

總之，在備考雅思寫作的時候還是要多多積累豐富的素材，學習地道的語言表達方式，一定要多動手寫！！！不斷地練習和修改，才能提升雅思寫作能力。